AdamAllen Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 O.k so i have had another play about with my magazine cover design and took points into consideration but would still like criticism on this one.Here it is...CheersAdam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ash-Kennard Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 looks so much better, very nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alley Rat Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 looks so much better, very nice.i agree, thanks for sharing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*BOOTHY* Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 Ace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackyyBoii Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 I agree aswell...although I still think the subtitles colour looks a bit strangeBut on the whole very good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rudirudirudirudirudi Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 looks sweet. i like the way the writing down the side sort of blends in to the background. looks much better with the green writing title.rudi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Up'n'away Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 Nice, didnt read the topic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onza-rider Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 looks so much better, very nice.i totally agreebig improvement Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghetto Rider Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 (edited) Much better!Just needs a fine black line around the title words and it's ace! Edited March 24, 2007 by Ghetto Rider Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strobe Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 (edited) Nice job mate, looking really nice! I figure you want more than just a pat on the back, so just to be anal - here's some constructive criticisms/suggestions ...* Play about with fonts for 'The UK's only...' part * Make the green UK more defined - maybe a thin black or yellow border?* Watch capital letters, such as in 'Joe baxter'* Watch consistency of a space or not after the '>>'* Add more colours, it's slightly bland with just black/white/green* Play around with colours/borders/background for the '>> 07 Zoo...' parts, too hard to read in my opinionMostly just little things an examiner/teacher might look out for, only 'big' thing would be trying to add more colour, I found when I was doing graphics the examiner/teachers weren't looking for things that were 'cool' and awesome looking like yours but just something that fits the brief, which probably included eye-catching, so sometimes I needed to sacrifice what I thought looked best and add more striking colours to get marks rather than street cred (pardon the language ).Huge credit to you for making something like that! Hope I helped. Edited March 24, 2007 by Strobe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdamAllen Posted March 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 Nice job mate, looking really nice! I figure you want more than just a pat on the back, so just to be anal - here's some constructive criticisms/suggestions ...* Play about with fonts for 'The UK's only...' part * Make the green UK more defined - maybe a thin black or yellow border?* Watch capital letters, such as in 'Joe baxter'* Watch consistency of a space or not after the '>>'* Add more colours, it's slightly bland with just black/white/green* Play around with colours/borders/background for the '>> 07 Zoo...' parts, too hard to read in my opinionMostly just little things an examiner/teacher might look out for, only 'big' thing would be trying to add more colour, I found when I was doing graphics the examiner/teachers weren't looking for things that were 'cool' and awesome looking like yours but just something that fits the brief, which probably included eye-catching, so sometimes I needed to sacrifice what I thought looked best and add more striking colours to get marks rather than street cred (pardon the language ).Huge credit to you for making something like that! Hope I helped.Whoa Cheers dude. CheersAdam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom 20 Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 Very well done again, looking better than the last one. And what he said ^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flubber Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 I so do wish that there was a dedicated magazine of trials on the shelf at me local newsagent. looking good ladFlubber:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bcourt2005 Posted March 25, 2007 Report Share Posted March 25, 2007 looks awsome hope you make the real thing as we need a dedicated trials mag insted of mbuk even though its good lolOnly critisism i have is that the title is a bit =0 well it sort of mixes in with the pagemaybe defining it a little more would be betterbut definatly looks great Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adskivw Posted March 25, 2007 Report Share Posted March 25, 2007 So much better mate! (Y) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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