AdamAllen Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 O.k so I've finished my front cover to my media project but not happy with it but i dont know what if you get me so i thought who better to ask other than the trials comunity So could people give me their views and tips please.Here it is...CheersAdam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ash-Kennard Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 That is actually pretty good, try the heading background etc in green though. I feel it may look better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Owen. Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 haha looks quality mate if only it was a real mag Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snee Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 O.k so I've finished my front cover to my media project but not happy with it but i dont know what if you get me so i thought who better to ask other than the trials comunity So could people give me their views and tips please.Here it is...CheersAdamThat looks realy good. Is a 6th form project? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Class Clown Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 i like it very much but the writing in the left hand side is a tad hard to read but still really well made . what you use to make it photoshop? fireworks?cheers Pimp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macy`d Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 well good mate if only it was rearl i whant one we should protest for one a company such as tarty bikes could help out or somthing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom 20 Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 wow looks ace, one suggestion though>.Writing could be a different colour and it would be fine Maybe green for the title and subtitles.But otherwise very well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Scarlet Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 Hmn looks nice mate, I too wish it was a real one.Hows about making the header text a tad bit transparent so it doesn't cover up the picture so much.And also agree about changing the text colour. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alley Rat Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 bajaj, looks better than mbuk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alley Rat Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 noticed a typo, neil tunnicliffe moving to adament, Should be adamant Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdamAllen Posted March 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 That looks realy good. Is a 6th form project?No mate, i'm in year 10 its just a normal btec media gcse I think.i like it very much but the writing in the left hand side is a tad hard to read but still really well made . what you use to make it photoshop? fireworks?cheers PimpFireworks, personaly I just dont get on with photoshop. lolCheersAdamnoticed a typo, neil tunnicliffe moving to adament, Should be adamantooops lol I'll change when I edit it all.CheersAdam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rudirudirudirudirudi Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 With your skills you could make it into a real one. I for one would be willing to spend good money on a decent magazine. Theres a money making scheme for you!yea writing in green would go with the green on the bike. keep going looks sweet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adskivw Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 £3.75, Sold!Shame its not 4sale though!Defo switch the colour of the writing to match that on the frame! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1337 Trials Posted March 22, 2007 Report Share Posted March 22, 2007 This is a good thing to make, I will definitally buy it if/when it comes into the shops ~Matty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simpson Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 change tarty to tartybikes.co.uk i would makes it a bit more formal and change the yellow on the white background font as it doent have enough contrast atm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bearded Midget Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 that is really good, if you didnt posts that you made it i would of been wondering where i can buy the mag thats how good it looks, anyone can mistake this for a real magazine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghetto Rider Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 (edited) Looks good!Green outline on writing deffo needed!Good work Edited March 23, 2007 by Ghetto Rider Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan6061 Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 well good mate if only it was rearl i whant one we should protest for one a company such as tarty bikes could help out or somthing Protest? Looks alright, maybe have the title smaller, or move it so it's not covering the main part of the picture...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dean-monty-101 Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 that looks well cool shame it isnt real Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackyyBoii Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 Great front-cover but I would make the yellow subtitles a more subtle colour.Hope this helps.Jack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keniii... Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 noticed a typo, neil tunnicliffe moving to adament, Should be adamantAlso Interveiw should be Interview...Very Good Like it... Impressive skills. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlie >est< Posted March 24, 2007 Report Share Posted March 24, 2007 Nice, Just change the color of the bullet points that are yellow. I have to squint to read them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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