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i have made a website i have never made one before

take a look

sorry about the cheesy music its the only stuff they had.

i am hoping u can give me some ideas to ad to it.

www.freewebs.com/westsussextrials

is it realy that crap that no one has any coments.

any west sussex riders tell me your names and a bit about you and i will put you on ther.

ther most be some riders on here i know ther is to from west sussex

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Hey man, good site for a first attempt. Get rid of the cheesey tunes though, lol, please! You should try and get some riders in your area together and put stuff like pics n vids of your areas riding etc...

Also you spelt everything wrong Lol. (Y)

i will change the music but i didnt know how to put my own stuff on ther ther will be lots more on ther soon.

also neil tunnicliffe will have it on his website under links soon.

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Your really going to wish you hadn't asked what to change.

Take the songs off the pages, its horrible especially seeing as a lot of people browse the internet with music already going so yours would be an unwelcome intrusion on their ears.

The pics are copyrighted so make sure you have permission to use them, also make sure neil isn't bothered about you copying and pasting the infor from his site.

Home Page

welcome to west sussex trials website home of natraul and street trials in west sussex.

Welcome to west sussex trials website, home of natural and street trials in west sussex.

everthink trials

I don't know why this is stuck here but if you desperately want it its... Everything trials

any think you want added e-mail me

Again its anything not any think. so.... Anything you want added, feel free to e-mail me

danshorter7@aol.com

Again make it a hyperlink but link it to your e-mail address so that people can click on it and have their e-mail program open a new message for them.

Neil Tunnicliffe Page

Essentially ok but then you did just copy and paste it all from his site. Maybe add somethign people don't know yet?

Dan Shorter Page

Name: Daniel shorter

Age: 15

Country: England

County: West sussex

Intrests: natural and street trials

Insperations: Neil tunnicliffe,craig lee scott

Bike: zoo pitbull

Anbitions: to be as good as neil one day.

ocupation: student

Name: Daniel Shorter

Age: 15

Country: England

County: West sussex

Intrests: Natural and street trials

Insperations: Neil Tunnicliffe, Craig Lee Scott

Bike: Zoo! Pitbull

Ambitions: To be as good as neil one day.

Occupation: student

Trials-Forum Page

want to talk about every think trials come over to the trials forum

here

www.trials-forum.co.uk

Want to talk about everything trials related? Come over to the trials forum, here:

www.trials-forum.co.uk

Tartybikes page

Need a upgrade tartybikes.co.uk are the leading online shop for all your trials needs.

Need an upgrade? Tartybikes.co.uk are the leading online shop for all your trials needs.

go on take a look and treat your self to somethink nice this christmas.

Go on take a look and treat yourself to something nice this christmas.

www.tartybikes.co.uk

You really should make it a weblink, just making it big won't make it clickable as well. Highlight it and click the weblink button in the freewebs editor your using then put the correct address into the little pop up window.

Ben Jones Page

Name: Ben jones

Age: 14

Location: West sussex

Intrests: dirt jumping,trials,moto trials

Ocupation: student

Riding: 1 year

Insperation: martin ashton (who?)

pics and more info soon

Name: Ben jones

Age: 14

Location: West sussex

Interests: Dirt jumping, trials and moto trials

Occupation: student

Riding: 1 year

Insperation: Martyn Ashton

Pics and more info soon

My Bike Page

my bike is a zoo pitbull 05

with magura hs33 rim brakes

try-all grinded rims

echo forks

middleburn crank

i am in the prosses of changing parts to

green zoo bars

zoo stem

maxxis highrollers

Bike spec would be better as a list....

My bike is a Zoo! Pitbull 05

Frame: 05 Zoo! Pitbull

Cranks: Middleburn pro trials

Brakes: Magura hs33's

Forks: Echo

Rims: Try-All (with grind)

I am in the prosses of changing parts to:

green zoo bars

zoo stem

maxxis highrollers

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Your really going to wish you hadn't asked what to change.

Take the songs off the pages, its horrible especially seeing as a lot of people browse the internet with music already going so yours would be an unwelcome intrusion on their ears.

The pics are copyrighted so make sure you have permission to use them, also make sure neil isn't bothered about you copying and pasting the infor from his site.

Home Page

Welcome to west sussex trials website, home of natural and street trials in west sussex.

I don't know why this is stuck here but if you desperately want it its... Everything trials

Again its anything not any think. so.... Anything you want added, feel free to e-mail me

Again make it a hyperlink but link it to your e-mail address so that people can click on it and have their e-mail program open a new message for them.

Neil Tunnicliffe Page

Essentially ok but then you did just copy and paste it all from his site. Maybe add somethign people don't know yet?

Dan Shorter Page

Name: Daniel Shorter

Age: 15

Country: England

County: West sussex

Intrests: Natural and street trials

Insperations: Neil Tunnicliffe, Craig Lee Scott

Bike: Zoo! Pitbull

Ambitions: To be as good as neil one day.

Occupation: student

Trials-Forum Page

Want to talk about everything trials related? Come over to the trials forum, here:

www.trials-forum.co.uk

Tartybikes page

Need an upgrade? Tartybikes.co.uk are the leading online shop for all your trials needs.

Go on take a look and treat yourself to something nice this christmas.

You really should make it a weblink, just making it big won't make it clickable as well. Highlight it and click the weblink button in the freewebs editor your using then put the correct address into the little pop up window.

Ben Jones Page

Name: Ben jones

Age: 14

Location: West sussex

Interests: Dirt jumping, trials and moto trials

Occupation: student

Riding: 1 year

Insperation: Martyn Ashton

Pics and more info soon

thanks i will change that

i have a;ready taken the music off i always listen to my own music when on the comuter and it was getting on my nerves.yes neil has given me permistion to put them on here people cant nick them from my sight either now ther will be a link on neils site to get to mine soon :P .

thank again

dan

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Hi,

Well for a first attempt it's not to bad. The key thing I would concentrate on is the media side of things; I know it's early days but I think the more quality media you add (Pictures & Videos) the more interest you will get.

Secondly, personally I have a lot more respect for web sites that people have put the effort in of designing and making on their own. I have taken into account this is your first attempt and I do respect your efforts but I think if you are considering using the web as a way of show caseing Bike trials then you should almost certainly consider taking up the challenge of designing and making your own web site in the near future.

If you feel you could use some help then feel free to contact me via: joshuas_46@hotmail.co.uk

I will try my best to help you out in any way possible.

Thanks, Josh.

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Hi,

Well for a first attempt it's not to bad. The key thing I would concentrate on is the media side of things; I know it's early days but I think the more quality media you add (Pictures & Videos) the more interest you will get.

Secondly, personally I have a lot more respect for web sites that people have put the effort in of designing and making on their own. I have taken into account this is your first attempt and I do respect your efforts but I think if you are considering using the web as a way of show caseing Bike trials then you should almost certainly consider taking up the challenge of designing and making your own web site in the near future.

If you feel you could use some help then feel free to contact me via: joshuas_46@hotmail.co.uk

I will try my best to help you out in any way possible.

Thanks, Josh.

thanks alot :) i will contact you if i need some help i have just put some vids on ther 5 minutes ago go check it out know the reason i didnt make my own is because i had know idea how to.ther are quit a few vids and pics now but ther will be lots more on the way :D reply after you have taken another look tell meif it is better

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Good to see improvement, although unfortunately the pictures on the videos page didn't load up for me (Anyone else having this problem?). Keep updating the site quite frequently but don't rush and produce lower grade quality, just take your time over it and do a good job; this should hopefully increase the sites popularity. All I can say now is good luck with the site for the future; and remember, feel free to e-mail me if you need any help/advice.

Thanks, Josh.

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Secondly, personally I have a lot more respect for web sites that people have put the effort in of designing and making on their own.

:D

What he said.

I have taken into account this is your first attempt and I do respect your efforts but I think if you are considering using the web as a way of show caseing Bike trials then you should almost certainly consider taking up the challenge of designing and making your own web site in the near future.

Pow wow.

Keep updating the site quite frequently but don't rush and produce lower grade quality, just take your time over it and do a good job; this should hopefully increase the sites popularity.

(Y)

Joshua, it sounds like you dabble in the web industry, got a site or something?

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hi all

proberbly not intrested but a few of the newer younger newbies might be.

changed a few thing on my site got some new neil t pics and set it out a bit better and most of all all the links work (Y) .

learning how to make a website properly with out using freeweb or anything like it in school at the moment might take up the chalange but i would proberbly prefer to get some more riding in, might start it on a rainy day though :) .

tell me what you think of the changes.

thers a new boy called tom on ther that i ride with he is the youngest trials rider that i no and is quite tallented :D .

dan

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yer i know ther copy right :D i have premision to use them though :P .

i dont see the point of spending time and money on a website though when it could be spent much wiser like on your bike and your riding it is diffrent for a pro but im just a boy :( and the sites can be quite costly£££££.

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Sorry mate, but I didnt like that site at all! :S

The font was too big.

The background image - find a bigger one so that we dont have to see neil one hundred tilmes there (though he is a good rider).

Didnt like the layout either.

This is a typical site for someone who just started.

You can do better mate ;) You know something about HTML and CSS i see. And if im not mistaken you also have some java script in there. As i said, if you know how to use all this, you surley can do it better :)

Not trying to be hash on you, but this is what I personally think.

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