cookie456_the2nd Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 (edited) Right guys, just wondering what you think of my lil site for my school project/for my bro. Any ideas/recommendations would be appreciated. Lockdown Entertainment Cheers guys. Edit: Its uploaded to my ISP webspace, dont know how quick it is really.. Edited October 12, 2005 by cookie456_the2nd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simon Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 The first thing i noticed, before anything else was the picture loading. I knew instantly what you had done, and low and behold, you've simply upload a 1600x1200 picture, then changed the width in the img attribute in the HTML. Don't ever do this, ever. You will still have to load the 1600x1200 picture, full size. This not only takes ages, it wastes bandwidth that needed not to be wasted. As for the rest of the site, it's not bad, but could be better. The navigation is horrible, atleast change the colours of the different states. The banner also looks very, well, cheap. Nice try though, a lot better then most could do. :blink: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 The site doesnt load for me. Im guessing by the no-ip address that youve got it hosted locally. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cookie456_the2nd Posted October 12, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 Whoops, my bad, wouldnt have the problem with the images loading if id uploaded what i sorted earlier. My teacher said about that. I changed it all but never uploaded what i changed. As for not being able to get on the site, Try this link. Im not hosting it, (using webspace that i get with my isp) i just used no-ip.com to redirect to that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Nick Riviera Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 to be blunt , i wouldnt employ you (Y) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackghostknife Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 Alot better then my one.. i f**ked up all the html and shizzle (Y) o dear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheCircus Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 Umm...It was a good attempt. But I was thinking, is this really something you should be selling your business upon? If we’re late, you don’t pay the full balance. Great - You ruined my wedding, but at least we get a small discount! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N.Wood Posted October 12, 2005 Report Share Posted October 12, 2005 "Thanks for visiting Lockdown Entertainment, the home of the best Sound and lighting in the South East. Whether you your planning a simple party or wedding, we can handle it. Giving an good solid service since 2000, we have been giving a service that is fast and reliable But Why Choose us?. 1. Prices are fixed/based on your own individual requirements. 2 . We ask you to choose the records styles in advance for your function. 3 . If we’re late, you don’t pay the full balance. 4 . Your booking is given in writing to you soon after your first contact with us." This stuff brings out the English teacher in me. Anywho, the bold bits and bobs are spelling/grammatical errors that you might wanna check out. Also, "Giving an good solid service since 2000, we have been giving a service that is fast and reliable" is a very wordy way of saying it, and you repeat yourself. Other than that, looks ok from a non- 'oh my god you got the HTML wrong you silly crustacean... gosh, idiot!' person's perspective. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sfboy Posted October 14, 2005 Report Share Posted October 14, 2005 The pictures are too dark :ermm: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dai the Socket Posted October 14, 2005 Report Share Posted October 14, 2005 The first thing i noticed, before anything else was the picture loading. I knew instantly what you had done, and low and behold, you've simply upload a 1600x1200 picture, then changed the width in the img attribute in the HTML. Don't ever do this, ever. You will still have to load the 1600x1200 picture, full size. This not only takes ages, it wastes bandwidth that needed not to be wasted. As for the rest of the site, it's not bad, but could be better. The navigation is horrible, atleast change the colours of the different states. The banner also looks very, well, cheap. Nice try though, a lot better then most could do. :ermm: Same as Simon said. to be honest the design isn't very good at all. Graphics look cheesy and unprofessional. Titles per page don't align up and the links are just standard links. Try making them a certain font / colour / rollover colour or such. Thats what makes good sites. I wouldn't hire you got my 2 year old little sister's birthday party if you cost £10, going on the state of that site. Gimme a shout if you want a 'proper' one doing or something. In a non mean way :- Nick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heatsink Posted October 14, 2005 Report Share Posted October 14, 2005 We provide the perfect DJ for your private party, club or pub. With a range of professional DJs we guarantee your night will go smoothly. All of our DJs carry a wide selection of music, use proffesional audio equipment with reliable and effective lighting displays to suit you needs. All of our prices are based on your individuals needs, so you will have to visit our Booking Us page for your individual quote, but we guarantee you wont be dispointed. I'm disappointed that you can't spell disappointed, and not professional enough to spell professional correctly :ermm: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaXsteri Posted October 14, 2005 Report Share Posted October 14, 2005 As above, is it really that hard to run the text through a spell check? :ermm: Dont give up though, with a bit of work im sure you can sort out all the problems Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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