andyrooforgothispassword Posted February 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2013 Just wrote a review to help anyway ha ha, thank you very much! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver Posted March 28, 2013 Report Share Posted March 28, 2013 I can't get into it. It seems like you go over the top with descriptions. I know it's good to colour descriptions with extra details and metaphors but go easy with it. It's like cooking. Add sugar to taste, but if you add too much it'll end up tasting sickly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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