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This is his latest Rap! (Its called provoke us)

There’s alota things in this world that provoke us

We just gotta sit back , relax and focus

There’s alota things in this world that provoke us

don’t let yourself tell yourself your hopeless

It doesn’t matter....

****** whineing about stuff that is not really important and actively encouraging people not to get help or interact with the people around them*******

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u all to approve on

No matter how much you stressed or provoked

Take every piece of bullshit as a joke.

That’s the best advise I ever heard so far in my life.

There’s alota things in this world that provoke us

We just gotta sit back , relax and focus

There’s alota things in this world that provoke us

don’t let yourself tell yourself your hopeless

X2

Thats shit.

Some nice metaphors and images, there's a few times where there's too many syllables and it sounded a bit awkward, and sometimes it seemed like it's just choosing a word so it'll rhyme, which happened a few times, and then it got a little erratic.

Biggie went all 'cars and bitches' and he was sweet as a nut.

ModifiedRappah2k9?

Yo', "my mate's got this it's properly sweet",

Don't believe me? Well I've got a receipt.

"Nah man, it's pure shit, it snapped in a week",

The lever fell off, and started to leak.

Choosing a frame mate? There's no need to jest,

I ride an Echo, and yeah, it's the best

Thats f**kin gold.

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Hes 15 and from scotland!

He goes relentlessly for six minutes haha, fair play! I think he needs to learn to breathe properly though, the end of bars trail off and you can hear him holding it in. Also sort out more of a flow within bars and think about metaphors rather than just looking for perfect rhymes, some of them are a bit predictable, brick, thick, willy etc.

That's just from listening, rather than pro rapper or anything by the way.

Edit: :lol: Good good word censor thingie. Willy as in prick

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Promise: Delivered. Internet exclusive for the Trials Forum posse.

"Flanneur; flar-nur, noun; 1. One who strolls about aimlessly; a lounger; a loafer. Those in persuit of the disinterested, artistically inclined wanderer of the city, of what they call 'city watching'.

Internet debut for my hangover choked voicebox. Yes, I know my right eye half closes when I'm hanging."

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Personaly, I have a one-band project but I enjoy collaborating with other musicians or doing covers.
Samples of my work:

My Hero (featuring Pauline Fiksson) Composed, arranged and mixed by me, vocals by Pauline Fiksson.

Cryptic Hypothesis Really old hip-hop instrumental work.

Gaze Up At The Darkness (Castlevania Cover) Again, an instrumental cover. One of my favorite game series.


Thank you for listening.

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Solid track man.

Like the vibe of it.

What DAW are you using?

Followed you on Soundcloud by the way.

I use FL Studio, but more importantly these VST's:

Sylenth 1

Zeta+

Rob Papen's SubBoomBass

Edison

Minimonsta

Usually finish the tracks off with a multiband compressor and parametric EQ.

Thanks man, will follow back :D

Glad you like...

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I use FL Studio, but more importantly these VST's:

Sylenth 1

Zeta+

Rob Papen's SubBoomBass

Edison

Minimonsta

Usually finish the tracks off with a multiband compressor and parametric EQ.

Thanks man, will follow back :D

Glad you like...

Have worked with FL Studio, Sylenth 1 Zeta+ and Edison, nice choises overall I would say! Due to the genre I work, I'm more of a Cubase guy though.

Similar to Edison is Slicex (which I'm using), very helpful if you are into sample-chopping and such for your tracks, I think it's standard in FL so you could try it.

I would like to try SubBoomBass some day, the only plugin I know from Rob Papen is Albino 3 which is perfect.

Will wait to hear more of you!

Keep it up :)!

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I like that, but I'd use less reverb on the vocal track.

Cheers mate! Yer listening back that's probably an idea, these are just bedroom recordings to get ideas down really, I know f all about processing/mastering etc. But yer, taken on board (Y)

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