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Borat

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Easy guys,

For my GCSE Art final piece, I have to film and edit a video, including a t-shirt I had to make. And then create a website design for the thing on the t-shirt. The site is initially called; getoutandrideyourbike.com but as I'm poor and had to use a freewebs site, it's getoutandrideyourbike.moonfruit.com

So please take a quick look at http://getoutandrideyourbike.moonfruit.com/ and tell me what you think so far. It's not yet finished yet, but ideas and tips would be much appreciated.

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Easily the best freewebs site I've seen. First attempt at designing a site in general? Like ever? It's far better than my first site. In fact it's far better than my 4th site.

I'd increase the text size as IMO it's too small, (all the text including the nav). and I'd try to reduce the amount of text on the home page. Other than that it looks ok to me. :)

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Navigation of the photos needs to be addressed. Also, the title of the top left video needs looking at.

I presume it's meant to read....."Travis showing us...."

Ahh, cheers for spotting that!

And ok, will sort the photos now.

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