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Ryan Crisp


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Looks good Ryan, I like the personal style of writing approach, as supposed to writing "Ryan Crisp does this and this" you write "I do this and this" - Far nicer.

I did notice that you write "an" Limey 320.

Shouldn't that be "a" Limey 320?

Spelling bee? :giggle:

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cool stuff Ryan, there is one thing thats niggling at me though. You say it's to promote your sponsors (namely Onza) yet most of the photos are of you riding your rockman (there is even a pic showing just the bike).

It would look more pro if you could get some higher quality newer shots of you actually riding your sponsors products.

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cool stuff Ryan, there is one thing thats niggling at me though. You say it's to promote your sponsors (namely Onza) yet most of the photos are of you riding your rockman (there is even a pic showing just the bike).

It would look more pro if you could get some higher quality newer shots of you actually riding your sponsors products.

yeah it was an old account on photo uploading site so......

but yeah i will get straight to it

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