Ashes Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 (edited) Please can I have some possitive criticism telling me where i am going wrong, what i need to improve and what new moves i can try as i havent been riding trials properly for that long. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJ657o2nj-w My good freind Rowlly21 posted this on his profile the other day as i didnt have a trials forum account but now i do so thatnks for your time and enjoy. Sorry about the music as well, as i loaded it onto youtube it didnt seem to want to accept the music. Edited April 27, 2010 by Ashes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falipe Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 Please can I have some possitive criticism telling me where i am going wrong, what i need to improve and what new moves i can try as i havent been riding trials properly for that long. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJ657o2nj-w My good freind Rowlly21 posted this on his profile the other day as i didnt have a trials forum account but now i do so thatnks for your time and enjoy. Sorry about the music as well, as i loaded it onto youtube it didnt seem to want to accept the music. liked it man. niceone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thinkdougie Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 nice, wish I had a car to practice on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rowlly21 Posted April 27, 2010 Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 i posted this vid on the main forum ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes Posted April 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2010 (edited) "Quote" i posted this vid on the main forum ! Ive mentioned that if you read it all nice, wish I had a car to practice on Have you got any advice though to help me build it up and make it better??? Edited April 27, 2010 by Ashes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cunny Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 nice vid ash Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeanuckleJive Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 1:38, what the hell? otherwise, cool, keep at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cunny Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 1:38, what the hell? otherwise, cool, keep at it I think he hops over his camera Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes Posted April 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 (edited) yer i pedal kicked over the camera just trying to mix it up abit Edited April 28, 2010 by Ashes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desmond Derv Posted April 28, 2010 Report Share Posted April 28, 2010 I like the end where you put it in the shed and just casually walk of off, nice touch, that cut looks bad though From a tricks point of view I ain't got a clue I cant do anything at the moment my self but from the filming side maybe put the camera on a platform or stack of books? It makes it a lil' easier on the eyes, imo* rather than the 'looking up' view, still a nice video, what bike is it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johntrial Posted April 29, 2010 Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 it is ok mate, keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes Posted April 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 I like the end where you put it in the shed and just casually walk of off, nice touch, that cut looks bad though From a tricks point of view I ain't got a clue I cant do anything at the moment my self but from the filming side maybe put the camera on a platform or stack of books? It makes it a lil' easier on the eyes, imo* rather than the 'looking up' view, still a nice video, what bike is it? Cheers for the camera advice mate, will aply it if i make another video. Its a Da Bomb Schoolie 05 that i ride, pretty basic though no special parts. Basic and does the job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earl Posted April 29, 2010 Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 Good first video keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes Posted April 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2010 (edited) You can now watch my new video throught facebook, this way it will allow you to hear the music as well which in my opinion just helps add slightly to the over all persona of the video. http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1396116703&ref=profile#!/video/video.php?v=1251671257335 Edited April 29, 2010 by Ashes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Vandart Posted April 30, 2010 Report Share Posted April 30, 2010 I liked it. shame to waste those skills by smashing your egg open. Wear a lid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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