Jake. Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Hey, as I'm interested in poetry I'd like to hear what you guys have writtenIt can be anything I'll start of with one of mine :FriendshipThere must be an angel in heaven watching over meNo wonder I can spread my wings so far and freeWords of happiness, so tender and trueJust the smile upon your face turns the skies blueAnd added surprise from you everydayIs enough to keep all my troubles at bayIf this is a dream, let it carry onAnd I bless the day our eyes first set uponIf i ever had to repay youI would have countless things to doAnd if I ever said "I hate you", that's just a pitiful lieAnd I couldn't hate you once, even if I tryYou're a star, ever so niceYou're my own personal Jesus Christ02/03/09Dedicated to Harry.B (TrialItAll) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake. Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Nobody on this forum does Poetry/Song-writing... ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Gray Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 written an ep but i guess thats not pure poetry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake. Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 written an ep but i guess thats not pure poetry.Let's read it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anzo Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Nobody on this forum does Poetry/Song-writing... ? A few people on here do song-writing I'm sure; although poetry I'm not too sure.Poetry takes feelings, emotion and a conscience - We're all nasty, rotten, 'ard bastards on here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Quinn Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Speak for yourself, I'm an angel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weirdoku Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Speak for yourself, I'm an angel I can just about see your halo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake. Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 A few people on here do song-writing I'm sure; although poetry I'm not too sure.Poetry takes feelings, emotion and a conscience - We're all nasty, rotten, 'ard bastards on here.You can write poetry in a form of hatred too, I've done it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anzo Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Ahh, true....even Hitler wrote poems. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Some people on here are thick,Lots of us want to beat them with a stickI like to call those people retard,Learn to spell you fool, it's not hard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davey1991 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 there once was man from...oh wait... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe O'Connor Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 The roses are dry,The violets are dead,The sugar bowls emptyand so is your head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JT! Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 (edited) The roses are red,The violets are blue,This shitty generic poem,too good for the likes of you. Edited December 8, 2009 by JT! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisboats Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Not mine but a pretty good one about women and murdering by oscar wilde here.The Dole of the King's Daughter by Oscar WildeSeven stars in the still water, And seven in the sky; Seven sins on the King's daughter, Deep in her soul to lie. Red roses at her feet, (Roses are red in her red-gold hair) And O where her bosom and girdle meet Red roses are hidden there. Fair is the knight who lieth slain Amid the rush and reed, See the lean fishes that are fain Upon dead men to feed. Sweet is the page that lieth there, (Cloth of gold is goodly prey,) See the black ravens in the air, Black, O black as the night are they. What do they there so stark and dead? (There is blood upon her hand) Why are the lilies flecked with red? (There is blood on the river sand.) There are two that ride from the south to the east, And two from the north and west, For the black raven a goodly feast, For the King's daughter to rest. There is one man who loves her true, (Red, O red, is the stain of gore!) He hath duggen a grave by the darksome yew, (One grave will do for four.) No moon in the still heaven, In the black water none, The sins on her soul are seven, The sin upon his is one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ash-Kennard Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Jake's obscene and a tool.He's a slob and a hideous mule.He's a sham and a chore,A dweeb and a snore,He's always repellent and cruel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Nick Riviera Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Oscar Wilde? that's so gay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake. Posted December 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Not mine but a pretty good one about women and murdering by oscar wilde here.The Dole of the King's Daughter by Oscar Wilde(took poem out as it would as it would annoy people)I'm not too fond on this poem, bit old and ... I can't explain it It's just not what I love Thanks for posting it anyways!Some people on here are thick,Lots of us want to beat them with a stickI like to call those people retard,Learn to spell you fool, it's not hard. Sweet! I may have to use this with people who are so lazy they can't spell...The roses are dry,The violets are dead,The sugar bowls emptyand so is your head.Nice twist to the original The roses are red,The violets are blue,This shitty generic poem,too good for the likes of you.Now now... How many times have I heard roses are red, violets are blue? The endings okayish... Jake's obscene and a tool.He's a slob and a hideous mule.He's a sham and a chore,A dweeb and a snore,He's always repellent and cruel.You must be a lovely friend! My name is Jake, you are soooo harsh! Kidding Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadManMike Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Roses are grey,Violets are yellow,I'm f**king colourblind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam-Griffin Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Roses are redViolets are blueI have a knife now get in the van. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davey1991 Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Roses are redViolets are blueI have a knife now get in the van.XD, ha ha that was almost to spontanious Adam. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BringThatShtIn Posted December 8, 2009 Report Share Posted December 8, 2009 Roses are red,Violets are blue,Some poems rhyme,But this one doesn't. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Quinn Posted December 9, 2009 Report Share Posted December 9, 2009 XD, ha ha that was almost to spontanious Adam.It's a bite from a previous rape jokes thread don't think you be fooolin me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adam-Griffin Posted December 10, 2009 Report Share Posted December 10, 2009 It's a bite from a previous rape jokes thread don't think you be fooolin me.I know i know It's been on sickipedia for years aswell, and Fish used it as his version of 'Hello' for a while Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake. Posted December 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2009 Keep em coming Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake. Posted December 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2009 Ba-Bump... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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