Davetrials Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Im, if you didnt notice, not the most gifted when it comes to the english language. so im really struggling with my personal statement, has anybody got any REALLLLLLLLLY good sites that will help me, ive been on loads from google, i just wanted to know if you guys had anything i hadnt found yet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
that NBR dude Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 I based mine on a personal statement my dad got sent, which he said was well laid out. I'll try and find it and scan it in for you later on.Andy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamness™ Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Is this your personal statement for uni applications i.e. UCAS? If so, pm me and i'll hit you up with my one that you can have a look at.Tam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun H Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Mine was f**king immense, unfotunately it's saved on my laptop which I left at Uni... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fixed Pants™ Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 (edited) There must be a couple of other websites you haven't found?EDIT!!! Dave is saved, the swearfilter undaves o(u)ther now! Edited December 23, 2008 by Fixed Pants™ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davetrials Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 (edited) other, god bless who ever made that hahaha, i consider that my present from tf:Palso ive found a few websites, i just really struggle writing long bodys of work, i tend to waffle on. Edited December 23, 2008 by Hugh Hefner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simpson Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 To write mine i formed a template myself which i usedParagraph 1 - Why I've chosen the course, and why I'm strong in given subject(s)Paragraph 2 - The other subjects I've chosen and how they have given me a rounded insight, very interesting etc.Then i thought about the traits that they would want for somebody doing the course because to be honest, they dont care how well youv'e done they want someone who is going to get through the course and get them good reviews and grades with minimal effort, So...Paragraph 3 - About bie trials and how this demonstrates my determination, and organisationParagraph 4 - All my sporting acheivments - showing team workthen ive forgotten what i did but finished it withLast paragraph - why i really want to do the course and how i think it will further me in the futureCan post it up if you want but doubt it will be much use seeing as your doing photography Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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