MadManMike Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Right, spent quite a while on this track. Now even if you hate Lily Allen I'd like you to download this and give me some feedback on the track itself - even if you have to kind of blank out her singing.I'd like to think my production is getting much better and you guys are always good critics, so fire away!No matter how harsh, criticism is always good - apart from stupid stuff like "It woz shit" from people that only like Metal or whatever... So yeah, constructive criticism is welcomed Lily Allen - Smile [The Scientist's Summertime Remix]320kbps HIGH QUALITY: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=SQO2WGNV192kbps MEDIUM QUALITY: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=0Y60105SIf MegaUpload doesn't work for you just add me to MSN: dirtyhastings AT hotmail.co.ukIf you're gonna leech it, please tell me what you think... even if you don't like it Ta. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I have a thing for lily allen. She's well hot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Papasnap Maher Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Ill listnen when i get home..but yer, lily would f**king get it hahah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 What about Amy Winehouse? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadManMike Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 What about Amy Winehouse?Scum? She could have been nice but she's just a rich tramp now lolHarsh, but true. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Token Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Winehouse is a scab. Wouldn't piss on her if she was on fire.I'd love to ruin Lily with Mr.Rothwell. Tag team. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadManMike Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 RE: My track, there's 2 minutes silence on the end for some reason - which part of "Cut Remainder" does my Encoder not understand? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Half way through and it's sounding really good mike. (f**k yes matt.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Nick Riviera Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 tentative, it's nice, but I really liked the horns in the original. probably not intended for the likes of me though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Papasnap Maher Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 What about Amy Winehouse?She used to be a picture editor at my work, before she become a hobo lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Quinn Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Well enjoyed that Mike. Wasn't sure at first but it's been on repeat for a while and io'm warmed to it alot. Real good to kinda relax to and forget about. I like her singing too Snare at one point seems a bit overpowering though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sneakers O'Toole Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Thats a corker. Only comment would be the bass seems to come in a bit strong at the start, could have done with a bit of a build up to the main pattern. But i don't know the ins and outs of music so i could be wrong. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadManMike Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 tentative, it's nice, but I really liked the horns in the original. probably not intended for the likes of me though.Nah it's all good... One mans Potion is another mans Poison Well enjoyed that Mike. Wasn't sure at first but it's been on repeat for a while and io'm warmed to it alot. Real good to kinda relax to and forget about. I like her singing too Snare at one point seems a bit overpowering though.Which bit in particular is too strong with the Snare mate? Happy to cut it down a little...Thats a corker. Only comment would be the bass seems to come in a bit strong at the start, could have done with a bit of a build up to the main pattern. But i don't know the ins and outs of music so i could be wrong.Very good point, perhaps do need to have a little less bass before the main riff comes in!Thanks, didn't think of that Keep the comments coming guys, really grateful! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan6061 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I quite like her music really... Wouldn't buy it, but I'd listen to it if I had to. Liking your track though! Still playing as I type. Feel well chilled out now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke Rainbird Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Snare: 1:30 through 1:50, and then when it's repeated through the rest of the track - overpowers the rest of the track and as such sounds almost MIDI-esqueQuite liking the track on the whole though - not a fan of Lily Allen's music, but that was better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazy_gap girl Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Hate her, watched her a few times on lily allen and friends all she does is look at her self in the camera... like every 3 seconds. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BONGO Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 I have a thing for lily allen. She's well hot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Nick Riviera Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Hate her, watched her a few times on lily allen and friends all she does is look at her self in the camera... like every 3 seconds.you're just jealous of her pins.that show was dogshit though bbc3 failed again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Concussion Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Oh I hate that bitch and any other `celebrity` child offspring, but I tried to ignore who it was and I thought it was a really mellow tune... not really diggin that fast snare beat though, just seemed out of place to me?A real summertime hit though, well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frika Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I'll download it tomorrow, off to bed now.She's FINE though.. (What do you all think of her new blonde hair?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dirtbiker Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Sorry but I have to say that I prefer the original, the snare running through doesn't seem to fit very well? Apart from that nice job though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BONGO Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 she looks like them twins in that photo.Lily is boss. I like the blonde more i think, or maybe it's just the fact that there isn't a shit fringe anymore! I think it's the change of style more than the colour. I love her music too lol. Sorry if any of the emo's or whatever else exists on this forum are ofended by that statement! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spode@thinkbikes Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I try and remove any association between the person making the music, and the music itself. If I didn't do that, I'd really struggle to listen to Coldplay.I'm not the biggest Lily Allen fan though, but Smile is probably her best song. The remix is nicely produced. What are you using to do your work? It might have worked better if you'd only used the verses and not the Chorus - the Chorus melody doesn't quite fit over the chords you've used, and it ruins the dynamics of the song a little. Maybe if you took the chorus, slowed it down a little and did some pitch shifting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomm Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I try and remove any association between the person making the music, and the music itself. If I didn't do that, I'd really struggle to listen to Coldplay.I thought most people did really struggle to listen to coldplay anyway?But yeah, I love Lily Allen. Oh and Smile is surely her most annoying song?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spode@thinkbikes Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I thought most people did really struggle to listen to coldplay anyway?But yeah, I love Lily Allen. Oh and Smile is surely her most annoying song?!I only like Coldplay's first two albums. Smile is a happy song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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