JonMack Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 I think the black boxes holding the text should be a bit bigger so there's more of a marginThe 'Issue 1' bit would probably look abit better sat underneath the R aswell And there's something about the white and yellow pieces of text at the bottom on the front cover which doesnt look quite right, doesnt fit in with the cover. Not sure what it is though, maybe its just abit too big..Other than that, looks good Yeah that's what I was thinking. Still working on that section, it probably is too big, but cheers for the feedback.Not entirely sold on the cover shot. Just a bit dull looking? Like the lit area seems a little bit underexposed, and there's a f**kload of black around what's a pretty un-exciting photo? It looks like it might be a big gap, but the dude's pose and stuff make it look a bit 'meh', which doesn't really fit in with the rest of the mag?Annoying thing is on my screen here the exposure looks spot on, yet when it's exported it seems completely unexposed, which I'm obviously gonna have to work on before it goes out properly. I'm gonna check out some other shit before I finalise it, still got a few photos to take, including one which will be make or break, really want to get it shot but the weather has taken a turn for the worse and time is running out, so there is a big possibility that wont even be the cover shot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hendrix Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Very Cool man Looks very professional!I don't know anything about Magazine making, but it all looks good to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JonMack Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Thanks a lot man, glad you like it.For those that care, the website is nearly finished, can check it out at http://revmag.co.uk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Thats quality Jon, I love the tipography on pages 1, 5. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke Rainbird Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Good stuff, Jon - the site's looking much better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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