Kieran@ZSClothing Posted November 15, 2007 Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 First vid on gu, don't be to harsh. give me some tips on riding please id be very greatful. link -> Thanks Adam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thurston Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 Im sorry but i turned that off after like the 4th time of you trying to get onto that brickTheres no need for so many failed attemptsTheres no need for pretty much all the track standing bar a couple of secondsDidn't like the editing with that song, the song is good but i don't think it goes with your ridingHope to see an improvement in the next vid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Biddle™ Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 Nice vid mate seem to be doing pritty well for 8 months riding Also the tune was uber PHAT Biddle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henri Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 reapeative and boring in my opinion. upgrade your skills mate with camerawork and balance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Anscombe Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 (edited) ok......i thought it was a good effort considering it was you first video so well done on that.you have taste in music.........i want that tune who is it by?editing on the other hand with that tune was pretty poor......bike looks sexyall in all well done dave Edited November 16, 2007 by mrkoxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ali C Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 ok, nice to see new riders.Wasn't that great a video to be honest, but I'll try and be helpful rather than nasty.The eiditing didnt quite go with the music, shorter clips and more of them would have suited that tune, also different camera angles always help (rather than just a static cam) and I am never a fan of night riding vids as you cant see much.I am not a great editor, but its like riding, the more you practise the better you get, I look forward to seeing your others.as for the riding....to be honest, I dont think that frame is doing you any favours. As you have just started, you will still be developing your balance, with a frame with such a high bb your center of balance is a lot higher than normal which makes balance sketchy unless you have it dialled....your trackstands look like they need a bit of work yet, a lower bb frame would help with that (I think EVERY rider should start on a old mtb or low bb frame, it helps with overall riding no end!!)Also with the high bb, the bike is doing a lot of work for you while back hopping, if you ride that bike, you will be slowing your overall bike handling learning. from the very first shot your body (well arms to be exact) didnt look quite right, your elbows looked too far out as if your bars are tilted forward too much, maybe experiment with some bar positions.....I always reccomend the bar to be tilted thurther back for a beginner as it gives a more natural mtb position which is easier to learn with.I will say that after 8 months I wasnt as good as you, but I was on an 18" xc bike! I like to think that bike taught me more in 18 months than 2 years riding a high bb bike would. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mowgli Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 stick at it, good effort for a first vid. Regards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pengsmelly Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 yo ads, liked the editing in the vid, and i no how long it took you just do the bigging. lol (all nite at james)You've improved HELL of a lot. keep it up man. oh and liking the new quality of the camera. hopefully see you soon dude. chow for now. matt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran@ZSClothing Posted November 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 yo ads, liked the editing in the vid, and i no how long it took you just do the bigging. lol (all nite at james)You've improved HELL of a lot. keep it up man. oh and liking the new quality of the camera. hopefully see you soon dude. chow for now. mattthanks mate, and yeah the new camera is awesome.ok, nice to see new riders.Wasn't that great a video to be honest, but I'll try and be helpful rather than nasty.The eiditing didnt quite go with the music, shorter clips and more of them would have suited that tune, also different camera angles always help (rather than just a static cam) and I am never a fan of night riding vids as you cant see much.I am not a great editor, but its like riding, the more you practise the better you get, I look forward to seeing your others.as for the riding....to be honest, I dont think that frame is doing you any favours. As you have just started, you will still be developing your balance, with a frame with such a high bb your center of balance is a lot higher than normal which makes balance sketchy unless you have it dialled....your trackstands look like they need a bit of work yet, a lower bb frame would help with that (I think EVERY rider should start on a old mtb or low bb frame, it helps with overall riding no end!!)Also with the high bb, the bike is doing a lot of work for you while back hopping, if you ride that bike, you will be slowing your overall bike handling learning. from the very first shot your body (well arms to be exact) didnt look quite right, your elbows looked too far out as if your bars are tilted forward too much, maybe experiment with some bar positions.....I always reccomend the bar to be tilted thurther back for a beginner as it gives a more natural mtb position which is easier to learn with.I will say that after 8 months I wasnt as good as you, but I was on an 18" xc bike! I like to think that bike taught me more in 18 months than 2 years riding a high bb bike would.my balance is really good, i actually managed to do a trackstand for ages, and answer my phone at the same time lol. ive been riding 16months but i stopped for 8 when i got into motorbikes so yeah but thanks for the tips mate, and the frame is much easier and nicer to ride than my koxx zoo and toxsin i have had before.Adamstick at it, good effort for a first vid. Regardsthanks mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran@ZSClothing Posted November 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 ok......i thought it was a good effort considering it was you first video so well done on that.you have taste in music.........i want that tune who is it by?editing on the other hand with that tune was pretty poor......bike looks sexyall in all well done daveit's pendulem and freestylers- painkillerIm sorry but i turned that off after like the 4th time of you trying to get onto that brickTheres no need for so many failed attemptsTheres no need for pretty much all the track standing bar a couple of secondsDidn't like the editing with that song, the song is good but i don't think it goes with your ridingHope to see an improvement in the next vidit was a tree stump about an inch wide, and do you not have anything nice to say? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ali C Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 my balance is really good, i actually managed to do a trackstand for ages, and answer my phone at the same time lol. Adamthanks mate.Try doing them in vids instead of the rocking ones in the vid, much nicer to look at Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaMmY Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 Nice one ads great vidlike the editingAnd i think maybe just one or two failed attempts would be enough.like the ending! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran@ZSClothing Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Nice one ads great vidlike the editingAnd i think maybe just one or two failed attempts would be enough.like the ending!yeah i know it took me ages to get on the lil stup lolTry doing them in vids instead of the rocking ones in the vid, much nicer to look at yer i know but i never bother lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
echo v onza Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 was some good riding, but to be honest way to many failed attempts,to be blunt my fav bit was the stupid face at the endi think that says it all!!!Dave! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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