biketrial6495 Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 ok i have been told that my english in these forums is not up to scratch! it was proberly because of many things including i was being lazy anyway the point of this topic i have just started editing my video 2 which i hope with some look should get me a small sponser as theres some good stuff in it. i was wondering if anyone could watch the video and tell me how i could improve the start colour effects etc etc the link is below ! http://youtube.com/watch?v=tWgpVZtusAkcheers ryan iveson Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Cristoff Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 nice start, cut out all the pics of your bike after you have introduced it though, and dont do as much strobey affects, then itll be better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scousertrials Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 (edited) Guy, one doesn't understand what you are asking. If you want tips on English then you need to start a sentence with a capital letter and end with a full stop. Use I instead of i when speaking in the first person and don't garnish you sentence structure with numbers to get you point across (2 get your point across). Probably is spelt as and not proberly.Please review with spelling corrections, however you must consider the use of the first person!Ok I have been told that my English in these forums is not up to scratch! It was probably because of many things including i was being lazy anyway the point of this topic I have just started editing my video to which I hope with some look should get me a small sponsor as there's some good stuff in it. I was wondering if anyone could watch the video and tell me how I could improve the start colour effects etc the link is below!The video was a cool little introduction to a better creation, I hope. Edited September 6, 2007 by scousertrials Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squince Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 I didn't like it, At all...Sorry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikeriding Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 (edited) what u wanna small sponsor for? if u get one itll be like free stickers or some shittbf not keen on the picture flashy thing, i prefer riding Edited September 6, 2007 by afroman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tom jersey Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 what u wanna small sponsor for?tbf not keen on the picture flashy thing, i prefer ridingflashy thingy is pretty crap and how can we help you make your video better when all we see is pictures and ten seconds of footage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenLeacock™ Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Best advise i got is to start again, and not to do pics, video's are ment to be moving, slideshows are photos. May sound harsh but i really didnt like it, sorry mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ste Wilson Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 my advice no strobe lighting or what ever that flashy thing was and more riding videos look like a good start though s---t---e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ash-Trials Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 Yeah too many flashing images and the strobe effect IMO looks rubbish. Hard to watch and only a small bit of footage in it.Back to the drawing board i say. A good video does not need any Special effects but need clips of riding more than anything else with good music.Ash~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant Hundley Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 I don't think it was very good and you think you will get sponsored ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squince Posted September 6, 2007 Report Share Posted September 6, 2007 (edited) If you want to make it good, Delete that video, Make another one with a song that will suit your riding. Heavey music doesnt suit wheely hop up 20" Wall... Mabey put a LITTLE bit of flash in it, but not the whole video! And at least get it on time...I would like to see some riding in the 'Improved Version' aswell, Instead of Pictures that come on for half a second...Think you could manage that?MikeHayes. Edited September 6, 2007 by squince Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JD™ Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Guy, one doesn't understand what you are asking. If you want tips on English then you need to start a sentence with a capital letter and end with a full stop. Use I instead of 'i' when speaking in the first person and don't garnish the structure of your sentence with numbers to get you point across (2 get your point across). Probably is spelt as and not 'proberly'.Please review with spelling corrections, however you must consider the use of the first person!Ok, I have been told that my English in these forums is not up to scratch! It was probably because of many things, including that I was being lazy. Anyway, on to the point of this topic:I have just started editing my 'video 2' which I hope with some interest should get me a small sponsor, as there's some good stuff in it. I was wondering if anyone could watch the video and tell me how I could improve the start colour effects etc? The link is below!The video was a cool little introduction to a better creation, I hope.If you're going to correct a post, do it properly please The video was shockingly awful, by the way.J Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuXXuy Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 Too many flashes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross Clayton Posted September 7, 2007 Report Share Posted September 7, 2007 IMO I would suggest you start again, and do not use as many pictures. Flashes arnt too good either as we carnt really see whats going on. Also you show A Zoo Python and i think i saw a picture of you on a monty, just use the same bike you show.Lastly I would'nt concentrate on a sponsership at the moment just ride and see what pops up.Hope I've helped Ross. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoeEden Posted September 9, 2007 Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 I dont no about you but IMO i thought that was pretty rubbish you need to start again make the video longer and keep the pictures out of it just get moving video clips the repost it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vee Posted September 9, 2007 Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 well, if thats the intro to your bike then its ok but when its starts with the actual footage dont put the flashing in betweentake the first 30 seconds and put proper footage of after it and make it at least 5 mins long then it will be okVee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0zzy Posted September 9, 2007 Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 too much flashing lights for me and not enough riding. creative idea though mate just shame it aint turned out that good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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