What your doing is, your focussing far to much of riding like some of the top mod street riders, really aggresive and rushed style to give a fast feel to the video in order for you to be able to use scremo music. As for your sidehops dude, don't focus so mcuh on the tuck, it looks to me asthough your sidehopping and letting the tuck do all the work and thats why your hanging off the side and all your weight is to one side, causing you to on/off. So, pre-load more on take off and don't tuck unless its REALLY necessary. As for the video. I personally don't think that kind of music suits you as a rider, my own opinion of course, perhaps mix it up for next video ? Taps, tap 90's, manuals to up to fronts and then maybe into a sidehop. Some lines and stuff thrown in. Find a song that really suits you aswell dude. Over-alll, for a warm up, spose it wasn't too bad.