Jack, this is an example of a good video in my eyes. Minimal editting, with a decent tune and flowing riding. Obviously, Nick is one of the best riders in the UK so his riding will be better than most, but his riding consists of technical lines and style, not necersarily on big moves, which i've found that more people like to watch. The only edits used are fade outs and fast motion, these edits are not overused and allow the video to generally flow better which is very important to maintain the viewers attention. Crappy edits are just generally annoying, and slow motion is only really needed if it meets the music, or if you're trying to achieve a particular theme, not really needed on a sidehop, tap etc. Music is also very important. Do not use a song that has already been used - again, this is very annoying and not very original. Before releasing a video, make sure the music fits your style of riding and you're happy with the riding featured, rather than saying ' I only have a muddy bank, you don't understand', save some clips up rather than using clips shot on one or two rides.