cool stuff dude, but i wasnt keen on the clips where you cut your head out i like it when the rider and bike are in shot, I can't talk because the amount of times i cut my mates head out on the video i made on the weekend was bad haha! check it out - http://www.trials-forum.co.uk/index.php?showtopic=150836
oh and i reckon you would be better off with a higher front end on the bike because it looks too low, it'll ride alot nice with a higher stem or some nice riser bars, the background shots though, looks like you live in a nice place!