First 15 seconds… dirt… dirt… dirt…. Shitty shade to rim Zoom out… up down up down bike random kid shitting by it WOW look its an Echo stem!! WOOP WOOP This is 29 seconds into a 2.29 video and you have showed me f**k all… if your going to be all artistic and shit do it better, and it only really works on feature length vids anyway Shitty small sidehop to rear… too many hops didn’t land…. Why put it in? On off up a small bank… fake frenchie… Same move… different angle… slow mo… why? Sloooooooooooow mo again…. Don’t over use it. / Don’t use it Same sidehop as the 1st hop… why… then load of gay hopping and a failed gap… if your going to put it in your video... and spend time editing… make sure you make a line of least!!! Then on loads of black screen. Without being dead offensive, take it in a more positive way, why would anyone watch it... what have you done differently? what lines have you made? how creative have you been? how much time and effort has gone into it? how smooth does the riding look? How much of your flair has gone into it? What does the atmospehre look like? (these arn't like "don't bother making a vid if your not amazing comments" someone can be a shit rider and still made a good video if their being smooth creative and happy when riding) Answer those questions about your own video, and see why no body will bother watching or commenting your vid.