Hey, good riding for just a months experience. Tell your freind to cut out the naff cheesy comments at the start and the end of the video, I found them abit irritating, because you didn't own anyone and you won't for a while, the music was shit too, sorry... My advise: - Don't try to be funny with stupid comments that flash up in the video, A simple "Jason222 vid 1" and the start would be much better. - Don't use shit music like that, something more chilled out or happy would work better and suit your riding and would make it easier to watch. - Keep riding, push yourself, and edit the next one with my advise in mind