All looks pretty rinky dink () Mark... little tip for the grease/oil - lace the wheel first (to the point you've said with a bit of thread showing) and then drop a bit of oil into the threads. Much easier and less messy! Bedding the spokes into the hub/themselves is something else that's worth doing too, but that's an additional step... If you can build a wheel then a little bit of extra tensioning/truing a few rides down the line shouldn't hurt. Anyway, decent guide Mark, I'd not have the patience to do all that! Oh, and triangle Park spoke keys are finger-eaters