the cut between the very first two clips is terrible. one should NEVER cut from a fairly quick pan to a fixed cam, it looks shoddy and confuses the viewer. also, some of the view changes should be edited so that it looks more like one take. having him throw the wrapper on the floor, cam change and him throwing the same wrapper again is also confusing. just small stuff like that can make a huge difference. generally, for moving cam stuff one can use a steadicam or similar. it's easy to make one, just google it...