Ok I've just watched it once and will watch it again in a minute to comment properly and justify my words. But getting a high tech video editor will not help you're quality one bit and as for editing skills it wont either. Showing yourself not making it then making it does make for a good video as its showing determination and skill rather than just a load of oh look hes up , hes gapped e.t.c I would suggest keeping to a simple video editor and letting the camera do the work, look into the angles and framing shots properly. The video was ok , great riding and dont be shy to show off a new bike, sod it if means a new short video, better than a long boring one. How long have you been riding for ? Craig