Im into that kind of music, so that was up my street. Youve made whats meant to be a professional video for a company, then halfed the quallity and made it look wank by putting it on youtube, just my thought. Try to film in lighter weather because it looked really dark in places. get some good angles (im not saying there wasnt any), and your well on your way too making a good video. Please dont qoute me on this and wind me up because its just my opinion.