Personally, I don't really like it. No offence mate, but you can do much better. It's too bland for my taste and I'd have to have a good think to find a part of it that I could say 'Yeah, he worked hard on that bit'.
Also, did you (pardon the pun) 'stroke' the girl? I can't figure out if that's why there are loads of big white dots to 'our left' of her.