shit the bed you can hop! i dont think it shows off your full potential though. I feel that if you grouped moves together then it would make for a slightly more impressive video. Im not saying you have to try and ride like your on a 24, just that if you did - massive sidehop, to technical rail ride, to massive gap it would be an interesting video - lets be honest you are more than capable of doing it! editing was not for me - i havent watched with sound as i dont have speakers, but the shots where you have filtered the clips just looks like you went crazy with movie maker. The transitions / quick changes does suit your riding though. keep bringing out the videos lad - your a decent rider and im sure your videos will continue to progress in both editing and riding!