"Thanks for visiting Lockdown Entertainment, the home of the best Sound and lighting in the South East. Whether you your planning a simple party or wedding, we can handle it.
Giving an good solid service since 2000, we have been giving a service that is fast and reliable
But Why Choose us?.
1. Prices are fixed/based on your own individual requirements.
2 . We ask you to choose the records styles in advance for your function.
3 . If we’re late, you don’t pay the full balance.
4 . Your booking is given in writing to you soon after your first contact with us."
This stuff brings out the English teacher in me.
Anywho, the bold bits and bobs are spelling/grammatical errors that you might wanna check out.
Also, "Giving an good solid service since 2000, we have been giving a service that is fast and reliable" is a very wordy way of saying it, and you repeat yourself.
Other than that, looks ok from a non- 'oh my god you got the HTML wrong you silly crustacean... gosh, idiot!' person's perspective.